After receiving feedback and thinking about our initial idea we have decided to redevelop some of our ideas.
Apart from Kool Kids which we don't think will appeal to a broad enough audience the other two ideas we feel will be too serious to develop into comedies as well.
We have looked at other examples of comedy openings and have decided that our ideas have been far too complicated for what we really needed to do and what we need to do is to make something far more simple.
Our new idea which we are yet to name, is set in a city at sunset. A teenage boy is running away from a very angry man indicating he has done something wrong. Whilst running away, the teenager encounters unfortunate comedic events like stepping in dog mess, tripping over bins and other various incidents. We will use many different types of camera angles and shots throughout this scene. The penultimate shot shows the teenager, after finding a passing garden to hide in, not knowing where the angry character is. The final shot shows the teenager relax, after he has found a place to hide, sitting against the garden wall breathing deeply. Then his phone rings which blows his cover as the angry man hears it and knows where he is. That is where the scene will end. The titles will be showing during the running footage.
We believe that this idea will appeal to a wider audience, I feel it will be easier to produce and will produce the best overall video.
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